We might as well get that straight from the outset. Mystery offers plenty of room for variation, too. Murder is universal—it can happen in any setting and any time.
January 4, on 04 Jan at 4: January 4, — Grasping for the Wind on 04 Jan at 5: Please take it into account that this is a very rough draft. The story is something of a superhero-arthurian-semi religious mix.
The hitmen attempt to do so, but fail to kill the main character, Adam, who either kills them or beats them up, not decided. The villian soon enough after tries to kill him, revealing that he is a necromancer, a person who gains the abilities of a person by killing and performing a ritual on that person and that Adams parents were both killed by the villians father.
I appreciate that I have left some obvious gaps in the plot but, as i said, this is a rough draft. Any thoughts or views on this story are welcome. I have some suggestions.
If a character IS major, you need to show that. For example, why mention the dog? Does he do anything important? Is his relationship with Adam important?
If so, show that. I suspect that giving him a concrete goal will raise the stakes. Anything sturdier than revenge? This would give the villain a somewhat more justifiable reason to want revenge because his parents died in the fight, too? And the villain sounds kind of one-dimensionally evil.
Now, Heroes made that quite compelling with Sylar the power-sucking serial killer, but 1 for almost all of the first season, it looked like he had a grand plan to nuke New York and 2 he had a hell of a lot of style and personality. Are there any relationships worth mentioning in the story?
What about between the hero and his lady friend? I originally planned for Sidney the dog to be a major character in the story but as time went on I gradually relegated him to a minor one.
And to get revenge. Well, revenge is a strong motive but there are several others. His friend who gets shot, is later brainwashed into despising Adam, believing that he fled and left her to die. Personality is going to take a while. The main romantic aspect of the novel is between Adam and his friend Grace whom he planned to ask out the day of the attack.
His relationship with his dog is strained as Sidney is generally incompetant, defensive and annoyingly sarcastic but very loyal.
I am a big fan of superheroes and would love to write my own novel. I started writing and getting my story organized. I currently have 40 pages of writing and 9, words. It just seem like a huge waste of time to me.
I may decide to write the novel anyway just because I really love superheroes and want to create my own story. Would love to get your thoughts on what I wrote. Mac on 01 Jan at I can be reached at superheronation-at-gmail-dot-com.
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Almost every sort of nonfiction requires some skill set or particular set of knowledge in addition to writing. I would highly recommend this article by John Scalzi.Mystery novels work a lot like any other genre, except that mystery writers murder their imaginary friends.
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