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Anyone using the pool when the lifeguard is off duty does so at their own risk. Did you see who sat in seat 4C? They left their hat behind. Whatever your own intentions may be, some readers will regard this usage as insulting, insensitive, or at the very least, distracting.
By "generic pronouns" I mean the pronouns we use when the gender of the person referred to is unknown or undefined, a common occurence in technical writing. The problem is that most people exclusively visualize a male "agent" when they encounter the masculine pronouns in print, even when they are clearly meant to be taken generically.
In technical writing, you usually want your readers to visualize themselves as the agent. In this article I survey some of the strategies for avoiding "the pronoun problem" that have been suggested over the past few years.
The focus here is on the practical; none of these strategies depart from English grammar as it is commonly used today. You can avoid the pronoun problem without being "a linguistic pioneer. If he detects a calibration change of greater than.
The supervisor will inspect the WSM, and inform the operator whether he can continue using the machine.
Among its problems, this paragraph contains many examples of gender-specific pronouns. If the operator detects a calibration change of greater than. The supervisor will inspect the WSM, and inform the operator whether he or she can continue using the machine. Try reading these paragraphs aloud to see why.
Alternate masculine and feminine pronouns A related strategy is to alternate using masculine and feminine generic pronouns in succeeding paragraphs, sections, or chapters. Half the time you are asking your male readers to identify with a female agent, and the other half, asking female readers to identify with a male agent.
Use the dreaded passive voice Some writers evade the problem by using the passive voice.
Despite the name, few topics arouse more passion among writers than passive voice. The bane of scientific writing, passive voice can be acceptable in technical and business writing when used sparingly, but attempting to eliminate all gender-specific pronouns by using the passive voice can result in some rather tortured prose: If a calibration change of greater than.
After the machine is inspected, the operator will be informed whether it can continue to be used. I want to ask the writer, "are you talking to me? Suppose the supervisor is Dr. X, will always be Dr.
X, and you know it and your audience knows it. Why not say so? X will inspect the WSM, and inform the operator whether he can continue using the machine.
Chen," than "the supervising engineer. The supervisor will inspect the WSM, and inform the operator whether the operator can continue using the machine. What if just we eliminate the possessives, thus: And we can probably assume that once Dr. The supervisor will inspect the WSM, and determine whether he can continue using the machine.
If its calibration changes by more than. He or she will inspect the WSM, and determine whether it can continue to be used. Direct, concise, with just one wholly appropriate compound, and a bit of passive voice in the last sentence.
Notice how much less distracting the compound pronoun "he or she" appears when it is applied to someone other than the main agent, the WSM operator. But when you are writing for an audience that is expected to do something, why not write as if you were standing at their side, talking to them?
Using the second person pronouns you, your, yours, yourself works well in instructional or procedural materials. If you detect a calibration change of greater than. He or she will inspect the machine, and determine whether you can continue to use it.Aug 19, · Experts are divided on the subject of personal pronoun use in scientific writing, which used to avoid personal pronouns in most cases.
Although the matter is by no means settled, many writing experts over the past thirty years have advised the use of personal pronouns /5(29). Aug 16, · How to Use Generic Pronouns.
Write without pronouns. Restructure sentences to avoid pronoun usage. Example: When the director authorizes funds, he will consult with the treasurer. Sometimes acceptable language for speaking is not acceptable for writing. You may say, "Everyone left the building when they finished 66%(18).
Whether to use personal pronouns in essays for IELTS is a question that comes up often with students studying for the test. Some people believe that these words should not be used in IELTS essays because IELTS essays are 'academic' and it is not usually advised to use such personal words in academic.
Using personal pronouns in IELTS essays. Giving your opinion and examples using personal pronouns. IELTS academic writing task 2. Skip to content. Preparation for the IELTS Exam. It would be very hard to write your opinion without using the word ‘I .
Technical Writing and the Pronoun Problem Briefly Nowadays, many people object to gender-specific pronouns (he, she, her, him, his, hers, himself, herself) in business and technical writing.
Each essay should have exactly five paragraphs. Don’t begin a sentence with “and” or “because.” Never include personal opinion. Never use “I” in essays. We get these ideas primarily from teachers and other students.
Often these ideas are derived from good advice but have been turned into unnecessarily strict rules in our minds.